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The well

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The well, the well
draw no water from the well
The secrets of the depths no living can tell.

Listen, just listen
and then you will hear
the whispers of the children who were murdered here.

The girl, poor girl
she came to the well
a babe in her arms which in the water now dwell.

One more, one more
soon followed the first
crying so fiercely his tiny heart burst.

The girl, poor woman
brought a third to the grave
dead in her womb there was no life to save.

The fourth and fifth were born as one
she brought them to the well
and then there were none.

The woman was hanged from the old gallows tree
when the children grow silent
her soul shall be free.

The well, the well
draw no water from the well
any who drinks are condemned to Hell.
This is a somewhat macabre little "nursery rhyme" that I came up with last night. I imagined it to have a terrible story behind it, and be something the kids used to scare each other with in a fantasy setting, mideaval village. I might use it for a tiny DnD plot some day :) And give the boys something to get the creeps about! :D Criticism, critique and comments are very much appreciated as always, and I hope you like it in spite of the creepyness :D
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GothicLoverUltimate's avatar
Oh. My. Gosh. This is AWESOME~!