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It is not the puppet I fear
oh
no
It is the puppeteer.

For the puppet may prance
dance
engage in romance
but his strings are pulled
one
by
one
until the puppeteer's dance is done.
Odd little poem that just popped up last night :) Hope you like it! Critique and comments will be highly appreciated :D
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cerealnovels Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Very good! :)
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Thank you :D Glad you like it ^^
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the slightly prancing lilt to this. It's a very charming little poem ^^
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
Thank you so much :) I really don't know what spurred it, but it demanded to be written so I had to! :D
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ^^ And yeah, I totally know the feeling. You're just like "wow where did this even come from" when you're done. XD
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Bugaboo972 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very interesting. Flows well, creative. I like it :)
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
Thank you for the very kind comment :) I am glad you like it!
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MisMatchedSockGirl97 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like it!
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
Thank you :D Such weird little things ones mind can conjure up in the middle of the night :D
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