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It crossed my mind
And lingered there
Like footprints in concrete

It invaded my heart
Made it home
Like a bird nesting

It lifted my soul
On waxen wings
I flew too close

Now I ask myself
My eyes closed
Was it worth it?
Silly little poem :) Any and all feedback will be appreciated as always :D
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LivingDreamer97 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's about love isn't it.  I always thought love was a good analogy to Icarus.
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
;) I am very happy you like it. And yes, it is about love, and ideas that settles in your heart and mind, not wanting to let you go until you have achieved the goal. It could very well be a poem of greed as well. Wanting to achieve power or something you cannot reach. It depends on what you read into it :D
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LivingDreamer97 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That always makes a good poem, one with duel meaning.
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Inanisvoid Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love the reference to Icarus... Great poem!!!
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Thank you very much! :D I am happy you like it :D
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i don't think it's silly at all. I absolutely loved it :heart:
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Thank you very much :D
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InHayle Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
A fun, unsettling saga of inner life. Excellent!
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thank you very much :D I am happy you like it :D
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RunsWithBooks Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Stylistically I don't know how I feel about the capital letters in the beginning of each line, but I really love the content. Really beautiful (as I have come to expect from you).
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