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It crossed my mind
And lingered there
Like footprints in concrete

It invaded my heart
Made it home
Like a bird nesting

It lifted my soul
On waxen wings
I flew too close

Now I ask myself
My eyes closed
Was it worth it?
Silly little poem :) Any and all feedback will be appreciated as always :D
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LivingDreamer97 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's about love isn't it.  I always thought love was a good analogy to Icarus.
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
;) I am very happy you like it. And yes, it is about love, and ideas that settles in your heart and mind, not wanting to let you go until you have achieved the goal. It could very well be a poem of greed as well. Wanting to achieve power or something you cannot reach. It depends on what you read into it :D
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LivingDreamer97 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That always makes a good poem, one with duel meaning.
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Inanisvoid Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love the reference to Icarus... Great poem!!!
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Thank you very much! :D I am happy you like it :D
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i don't think it's silly at all. I absolutely loved it :heart:
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Thank you very much :D
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InHayle Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
A fun, unsettling saga of inner life. Excellent!
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thank you very much :D I am happy you like it :D
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RunsWithBooks Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Stylistically I don't know how I feel about the capital letters in the beginning of each line, but I really love the content. Really beautiful (as I have come to expect from you).
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
*Chuckles* Thank you very much for the sweet comment :D *Curtsies* I am happy you like the contents if not the style :D
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chapaV Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Professional Writer
I like the footprints in concrete, a sort of remaining in absence.
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thank you very much for the comment :D I am glad you like it :D
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Professional Writer
Footprints in concrete. Beautiful description!
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thank you very much :) Happy you like it :D
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aqCculin Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
its agreat poem
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thank you very much :)
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der-steppen-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Writer
I like it because it's concise and simple, and it seems to be holding some powerful emotion
I love little, simple poems! :)
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thank you very much for the nice comment :D I am happy you like it :D
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this :)
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thank you :D
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :)

Thank you so much for all the faves ;u; :hug:
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xWickedxRosex Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Writer
I love the ring to it, and the rise and fall of the words as you read through. Good Work <3
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thank you very much for the kind comment :D I am happy you like it :D
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xWickedxRosex Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Writer
No problem at all <3
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Black-Jack-Attack Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Photographer
Very purdy:D
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thank you :)
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Pirate-Kai Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful poetry! You're very talented! ^-^
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Thank you very much for the sweet comment :) Glad you like it :D
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Pirate-Kai Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're very welcome dear! ^-^
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